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Sunday, 28 November 2010

" ये मेरी ज़िन्दगी "

कभी पास तो कभी दूर है
ये मेरी ज़िन्दगी |
कभी खुश तो कभी गम है 
ये मेरी ज़िन्दगी |
कभी अँधेरी तो कभी रौशनी है
ये मेरी ज़िन्दगी |
कभी धुएं में तो कभी श्वेत वर्णी है
ये मेरी ज़िन्दगी |
कुछ खट्टी पर बहुत मीठी है
ये मेरी ज़िन्दगी |
कहीं तकरार तो कहीं ढेर सारा प्यार है
ये मेरी ज़िन्दगी |
कहीं तो शुरू है पर अंत नहीं है 
ये मेरी ज़िन्दगी |
बस चलते जाने की और खुशियाँ लुटाने की खातिर है
ये मेरी ज़िन्दगी |
                                            -अक्षय ठाकुर "परब्रह्म" 

34 comments:

Anonymous said...

Best Poem I've ever read , Mr. Akshay.

- Shruti

Pratishtha Rastogi said...

bilkul sahi kaha ....... ye zindagi bahut pyari hai ise sirf khubsurti or sachhayi k sath jeete jao to ye humesha naye naye rang dikhaegi.....or unka ek alag hi andaz hoga.............
lovely poem......

Unknown said...

mind blowing mr. boy...
ur r tooo goooooood
bhot pyara hai
n bhot sweet bhi hai...
live life like this then all of us will b happy forever..........

Unknown said...

@ Shruti
Thanks , but why like "Anonymous" ? Where is your profile ?

@Pratishtha
Thanks a lot. :)

@Sunanda
Hmm , Thanks. :)

Unknown said...

great post :)) bahut sahi baat kahi aapne

from pen of nidhi said...

REALLY nice one:))

Unknown said...

a real poem

Unknown said...

@ Sumit - Thanks yaar |

@Nidhi - Thank you , Girl :)

@Abhi Bhaiyya - :-)

Pari.................. said...

कभी धुप ,तो कभी छाव है
ये मेरी जिंदगी |
हरपल एक नया संग्राम है
ये मेरी जिंदगी |
कभी बचपना तो कभी समझदारी है
ये मेरी जिंदगी |
बस हरपल मैं खुशिया
बिखरती है मेरी जिंदगी |
अगर समज़ना चाहू तो एक पहेली है
ये मेरी जिंदगी |
पर सुलज़ाने जाऊ तो कितनी सरल है
ये मेरी जिंदगी |
क्या बताऊँ कैसी है
ये मेरी जिंदगी |
बस भगवन की देन,माँ-बाबा का आशर्वाद है
ये मेरी जिंदगी |
दोस्तों का प्यार ,और अपनोका साथ
यही है ये मेरी जिंदगी |
बस अपने मन से जीने की चाह है
ये मेरी जिंदगी |
है ये मेरी जिंदगी
बस यही है ये मेरी जिंदगी |
-----------------------प्रणिता कुलकर्णी
Good One Akshay .Keep it up

Unknown said...

Pranita Ma'am -

Such a nice composition. Thanks a lot. :)

Anonymous said...

life is an endless strife....accept as it comes...giv unconditinal lov and care ...soon u;ll get it is returning towards u....giv u peace and contenment
God bless u....

Unknown said...

Thanks Rainy Ma'am :)

Unknown said...

life is a gift so everybdy must njoy it.....

Unknown said...

Upwan Bhaiyya - You are right. We should enjoy our life. Ek chhoti si zindagi , na jaane kahan le jaaye... :)

कभी कभी बस यूँ ही said...

बस चलते जाने की और खुशियाँ लुटाने की खातिर है
ये मेरी ज़िन्दगी ...बहुत ही सुन्दर पंक्तियों के साथ अंत किया है एक बेहतरीन रचना का ...Gopi

Unknown said...

Bahut bahut dhanyavaad Gopi Sir :)

Yograj Prabhakar said...

अक्षय भाई, ज़िन्दगी की अलग अलग रंगों को बड़े ही मासूम अंदाज़ में पेश किया है आपने अपनी कविता में, पढ़ कर अच्छा लगा !

//कभी धुएं में तो कभी श्वेत वर्णी है //

यह ख्याल तो कमाल का है !

Unknown said...

Very beautifully written...i really like it :)

Unknown said...

योगराज सर , बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद एवं आभार |

Unknown said...

Surbhi : Dear , Thanks a lot |:)

Anonymous said...

well said brother......really liked it....

Udan Tashtari said...

बढ़िया है.

Prabhakar said...

Well composed, meaningful, touchy.. Overall fantabulous. Keep on Writing. God Bless.

neha said...

Very nice poem and it shows that your imagination power and feelings are so good that, it is out of reach of any comparison.

Unknown said...

Thanks to all of you :)

Umang said...

The best thing about your poems is that you always reflect positivity. God bless.

Unknown said...

Umang Sir :- Thank you very much. :)

kAustubh said...

Nice One!! Simple and straight forward..

Anonymous said...

gohhd..amazzing work buddy..
know what..the first time i read it .. it exhibited a sense of 'pride' for ones own life.
the second time i went thru it..it boasted inspiration..
and the next time i read..i cud sense the relevance it holds in our day to day's life..

OUTSTANDING COMPOSITION !!!

2 days..and ur comments section is overflowing :)

Anonymous said...

gohhd..amazzing work buddy..
know what..the first time i read it .. it exhibited a sense of 'pride' for ones own life.
the second time i went thru it..it boasted inspiration..
and the next time i read..i cud sense the relevance it holds in our day to day's life..

OUTSTANDING COMPOSITION !!!

2 days..and ur comments section is overflowing :)

Ashutosh Singh

Unknown said...

Bas chalte jana aur khushiya lootna ke khatir...

LOVE THIS LINE :) :) :)

beautiful work.

Unknown said...

Thanks Kaustubh , Ashu Bhaiyya and Shiva Bhaiyya :)

Sudha said...

Yeh to meri bhi zindagi.. :p All the shades that makes life beautiful :-)

Shakti Singh said...

Lots of comments...what to say.gud lines..! But i describe in my own way,"LIFE_Walking on a unknown path thats my NIRVANA"

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