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Sunday 12 June 2011

माँ

काश के तुम होती मेरे साथ आज ,
पर क्या करूँ , ज़िम्मेदारी है तुमपर 
पूरे परिवार की , और आज भी तुम कहती हो 
"मेरे बेटे तेरी यादों में दिन कट जाता है , और 
रातों में तुझे सुलाने को लोरी गाते गाते
दिन चढ़ आता है | " 

- अक्षय ठाकुर  "परब्रह्म" 

9 comments:

apurv yash thakur said...

good one....

Ratnesh Kr Gupta said...

Nice one ... Keep it up Akshay ...

Unknown said...

@Apurv and Ratnesh Bhaiyya - Thank you :-)

CHANDRA BHUSHAN PANDEY said...

really touchable......plz add somthing more if possible

Unknown said...

@Chandra : Thanks , and yeah I will add it something soon.

Anonymous said...

soo emotional.. naice 1 .... keep it up :)

Prabhakar said...

Really Touching .


One suggestion Akshay - don't be in hurry to finish your writings. Let all your emotions flow on the paper. Lamba taano, itni jaldi khatam mat karo. Take ur time. Tab aur jyada maza aayega


Regards
Prabhakar

Anonymous said...

Rainy says...nice1.

Unknown said...

Prabhakar Bhaiyya : Thanks for the suggestion. I'll keep in my mind this thing from next time. :)

Rainy Ma'am : Thank you. :)

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