I'm not afraidTo take a step ,
To start a life
Which is new to me ,
I'm breaking out off this cage .
I know I'm not alone
I'll set my goals ,
I'll find a path ,
I'll walk this road
Together , with "You" ;
Through the dark storms
Whatever , weather
Cold or warm ,
Shine or dark ,
I'm not afraid .
I had enough
Till when you left ,
I miss you every moment
I lived your dream .
It wasn't my fault
You got me very wrong ,
You left me like a pawn.
That day
I was afraid ,
But now
I've lived one epoch
Had very much shock ,
I did everything I can
Now , I want to feel this sweet rain
I'm not standing in the bloody drain ,
And , moreover
I'm not afraid ,
To take a step
I'm not afraid.
-- अक्षय ठाकुर "परब्रह्म"
9 comments:
Nice one mate...... flawless poem I must say... keep it up..... :)
Really good. Some work needed and it would be outstanding. e.g.
Now , I want to feel this sweet rain
I'm not standing in the bloody drain ,
Trying too hard to rhyme
One or two improvements and I think you could get a magazine to publish it.
Nice one! Keep up the good work! :-)
So Care r u...
Your Poem Lines tell's reality of Life.
Go Ahead...!
nice beta..!!
it's very heart touchy.
dude awsme.....
day by day you are moulding your emotions in words nicely.. keep up the good work.. loved it..
Excellent Poem!
Never Back Down...Go Like A Man,Not In Poems,In Real Life Also.!!!Live Like A Legend..My Wishes For U Bro.
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