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Friday 10 September 2010

खुशियाँ बिखरा कर आता हूँ ...!

इक दिन मैं निकला यूँ ही
चलो , ये दुनिया घूम कर आता हूँ ,
लोगों से मिलकर आता हूँ |
कुछ खुशियाँ , कुछ दुःख के पल  ,
थोड़ा बच्चों संग किलकारी मार कर आता हूँ ;
चिड़ियों के संग चहक कर , उनको 
घर तक छोड़ कर आता हूँ |
इस सुन्दर नीले आकाश में 
कुछ दूर घूम कर आता हूँ |
सागर कि गहरी साँसों में
इन उठती गिरती लहरों से
उठकर गिरना , गिरकर उठना
सीख कर आता हूँ |
इन रंग बिरंगे फूलों से  .
सबको महकाना सीख कर आता हूँ |
इन ऊंचे नीचे पर्वत से 
कुछ जज्बा सीख कर आता हूँ  |
इस अविरल झरने के पानी से 
बहते रहना सीख कर आता हूँ ,
कुछ खुशियाँ बिखरा कर आता हूँ |
दुःख को सिमटा कर आता हूँ 
कुछ आंसू पोछ कर आता हूँ ,
लोगों को हंसा कर आता हूँ  |
मैं दुनिया घूम कर आता हूँ
खुशियाँ बिखरा कर आता हूँ ...!


                   -- अक्षय ठाकुर "परब्रह्म" 

21 comments:

Sandeep Singh said...

Nice Job... man..

Mai poem padk kar aata hun..
mai khusian le kar aata hun..

Zimbabwe vgtjbkjkij said...

Nice one! Cheers! :-)

Anupam Shrivastava said...

Bravo..!!!

Prabhakar said...

Bahut achi likhi hai, it left smile of my face while reading.. Chalo tumne khushiyan bikherni shuru kar di :)

Unknown said...

really..!!! nice job dude........waise aaj kal aise poetry koi nhi karta kyunki aise thoughts nhi hai.......chalo acha laga yeh spirit dekh kar.......
aisa karo ab akshay ki madhushala bhi likh lo.....
best of luck............

ashish gupta said...

very nice and gr8 thoughts....during reading this my village picture automatically created in my mind..u must be there that time....sometime i miss those places.....
very nice job and all the to u and ur pen also..

Unknown said...

Very meaningful, poem.very nice,keep it up.

Pari.................. said...

Good One Akshay......
bus aur ek kam karna
"Jindgi ko karib se jan kar jindgi ke char pal jike aana""
be happy always..

Pari.................. said...
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Unknown said...

you have beautifully define yourself.
Nature is vivacious and surprising like you.. nature exist so the beauty exist..
I strongly believe that," there is subtle magnatism in nature, which if we unconsciously yield to it, will dierct us a right"..

Unknown said...

VERY NICE..
I just love the way you write..
keep smiling always and spread happiness everywhere you go..

Anil Gupte's Various Blogs said...

Excellent! Very evocative. Can you recite it at the Freshers' party?

I especially liked:
चिड़ियों के संग चहक कर , उनको
घर तक छोड़ कर आता हूँ |

Unknown said...

Thanks a lot to all of you ! :)

Unknown said...

@ Gupte Sir
Thank you ! And yes sir , I will recite it at Fresher's. I will talk to you on this thing as soon as possible (On chat or In college )..! :)

Naval J Kosambe said...

Akshay man I am proud of you and your work.You rock man keep up the good work.

"
दुःख को सिमटा कर आता हूँ
कुछ आंसू पोछ कर आता हूँ ,
लोगों को हंसा कर आता हूँ |
"
Liked these lines...

chandan said...

bhai mast likha hai.
thoda or broad soch. topic ko or specifie kar.

Anonymous said...

wow....great yaar..upcoming poet! gud1

Anurag said...

Bahut Khoob!

Anonymous said...

gud insight
raul

Shruty said...

http://shrutinarula.blogspot.com

Kuchh ankahi icchayein.wrote a hindi poem..do read that akshay..our thoughts are quite similar.

Unknown said...

amazing!!

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