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Thursday 12 August 2010

Credulous : The Real Life...!

I woke up ,
It was a plenty morning ,
Sun light was peeping out of clouds
Birds were singing quiet-a-loud.
I went for a walk,
Crossed the road,
Some fountains were sprinkling ,
Some old fellows were walking ,
Some butterflies were flying
I was walking , walking and walking.
I thought there are only
Waves of happiness , in the world , spreading slowly
Then , Suddenly I saw a boy
With no clothes and no toy ,
Looking at the blue sky
Also wants to try ,
To touch the Zenith ,
But he had no choice
Then I realized
"We don't always have a choice"
This is the Real-Life..!
              -- अक्षय ठाकुर "परब्रह्म" 

11 comments:

Prabhakar said...

Awesome one :)
brilliant - And Rightly said We don't always have a choice "

Infact - You won't get what you deserve in life, you will only get what you negotiate in life. There are negotiations in each and every moment of life in one way or other.

Cheers
P P

Vijay Shukla said...

Good One an Eye opener.
Carry on Dude.

apurv yash thakur said...

a perfect one......carry on dude...

jindal_02 said...

Bingo...
Walk vn u thought in morning...wright?
Good lines ...in poem.
Every things r depend on Choice in Life..!

manas mishra said...

touching............very touching.........

Unknown said...

@ All
Thanks a lot..!

Anil Gupte's Various Blogs said...

Good poetry....

Unknown said...

It's perfectly correct that many a times we don't
have any choice. We have to accept the life as
it is. But this should not stop our struggle for whatever we aimed for or what we deserve for. And
I think that is real life!
You have very natural style of writing! Keep it up!

Sucheta Hardikar

Unknown said...

Nice thoughts about having "choice" in life!!
That's true and is real life! would appreciate such more thoughts..... keep it up!!!

Simi Mam

Unknown said...

@ Gupte Sir , Sucheta Ma'am and Simi Ma'am

Thanks a lot for sharing your views. :)

Unknown said...

really real....

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