I woke up ,
It was a plenty morning ,
Sun light was peeping out of clouds
Birds were singing quiet-a-loud.
I went for a walk,
Crossed the road,
Some fountains were sprinkling ,
Some old fellows were walking ,
Some butterflies were flying
I was walking , walking and walking.
I thought there are only
Waves of happiness , in the world , spreading slowly
Then , Suddenly I saw a boy
With no clothes and no toy ,
Looking at the blue sky
Also wants to try ,
To touch the Zenith ,
But he had no choice
Then I realized
"We don't always have a choice"
This is the Real-Life..!
-- अक्षय ठाकुर "परब्रह्म"
It was a plenty morning ,
Sun light was peeping out of clouds
Birds were singing quiet-a-loud.
I went for a walk,
Crossed the road,
Some fountains were sprinkling ,
Some old fellows were walking ,
Some butterflies were flying
I was walking , walking and walking.
I thought there are only
Waves of happiness , in the world , spreading slowly
Then , Suddenly I saw a boy
With no clothes and no toy ,
Looking at the blue sky
Also wants to try ,
To touch the Zenith ,
But he had no choice
Then I realized
"We don't always have a choice"
This is the Real-Life..!
-- अक्षय ठाकुर "परब्रह्म"
11 comments:
Awesome one :)
brilliant - And Rightly said We don't always have a choice "
Infact - You won't get what you deserve in life, you will only get what you negotiate in life. There are negotiations in each and every moment of life in one way or other.
Cheers
P P
Good One an Eye opener.
Carry on Dude.
a perfect one......carry on dude...
Bingo...
Walk vn u thought in morning...wright?
Good lines ...in poem.
Every things r depend on Choice in Life..!
touching............very touching.........
@ All
Thanks a lot..!
Good poetry....
It's perfectly correct that many a times we don't
have any choice. We have to accept the life as
it is. But this should not stop our struggle for whatever we aimed for or what we deserve for. And
I think that is real life!
You have very natural style of writing! Keep it up!
Sucheta Hardikar
Nice thoughts about having "choice" in life!!
That's true and is real life! would appreciate such more thoughts..... keep it up!!!
Simi Mam
@ Gupte Sir , Sucheta Ma'am and Simi Ma'am
Thanks a lot for sharing your views. :)
really real....
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